Thursday, April 19, 2012

Notes #4 & #5

Fragments 1953
In the poem “Fragments 1953” by Gottfried Benn, the author writes with a sensible precise diction that draws the reader to listen on how “a day without tears is a rare occurrence.” He explains that those days with tears, is “practically” an incident of a series of events in a person’s life that are going to occur no matter if you were the blame for them or not, it is going to happen. rare occurrencerare occurrenceA day without tears is a rare occurrenceIn addition the author explains a semi-nostalgic but admiration of the times during 1953, when “men still wore starched collars” and went through a great deal of pain, that express much disappointment in life. In addition also feels like the writer wants to show some confusing between how it is now and how it was then. He writes that those were the years “when something whispered” which suggest a sense of a fearful tediousness amongst people during 1953.

The Living End
In the poem “The Living End” by Samuel Menashe, the author writes a miniature but clear-cut poem that goes straight into the anthology of disappointment and failure. Because of the poem be short it expressing the feeling that life is too short, and that people aren’t always able to do everything that they dreamed of, because when the author writes “before long the end.” And because life is so short towards the end there will be “mis-grivings about what you did,” stating that what you want to do may not be what you do or if you can interprete that what you have done, later in lfe there may be some regrets. This will have a person feeling like a failure with a great deal of disappointment because of what you were not able to do and/or what you’ve done that you are not too proud of.

Friday, April 13, 2012



Note # 2 Gladiator

In the scene titled "Failure as a Father" of the movie "Gladiator" Marcus Aurelius, a Roman Emperor from 161 to 180 AD informs his own son, Commodus, that he will not succeed him on the throne. Commodus reaction to the words of his father suggested a sense of divination or forthcoming due to a letter from his fathers. And in the words of his father Marcus Aurelius (in the letter), Commodus felt an unwillingly impression which suggested a lack of four chief virtues; "wisdom justice, fortitude temperance," and realize that he had no of them but instead he had "Ambition. That can be a virtue when it drives us to excel. Resourcefulness, courage, perhaps not on the battlefield, but... there are many forms of courage. Devotion, to my family and to you." This exemplifies the character of Commodus as a character of pride and self satisfaction amongst himself and feels that his four chief virtues are just as important as his fathers. The calm depressed but angry that Commodus feels since he feels impotent to propitiate  his father with anything and everything that he does frustrates him when all he wants is "for ways to please you, to make you proud. One kind word, one full hug." However, his father explains to Commodus in a heartfelt sincere way that "your faults as a son is my failure as a father." With Commodus feeling the 'disappointment and failure' to become the next heir of the throne, while his father feels the 'disappointment and failure' as a father creates this scene of complete chaos which in the end has one of them becoming deranged....Commodus

Note # 3 Friday Night Lights

In the scene titled "Falling Short" of the movie "Friday Night Lights" the Permian High Panthers of Odessa, Texas, find themselves in the state championship football game representing a community that is going through economic turmoil plus the numerous of ongoing personal conflict. However, a great seek of comfort and joy comes from the community each and every Friday night when the Permian Panthers takes the field and try to bring happiness to the community by acting as the only successful thing that is going on. And when they reached to the state championship game nothing would be better for the sake of the community to bring home a championship. In the opening of this scene the Panthers star quarter back Mike Winchell takes the snap with the clock running down to 0:00 and this background music begins. The upbeat dynamic sound and the tenacity of their star quarterback to evade and/or take on defenders with ease suggested the absence of a tragic failure for the Panthers. But when it came to the end the Panthers fall inches short of winning the state championship in the final seconds and are left to console each other after the defeat. While observing each and every fan face there was a feeling of an uneasy bleakness/confusion amongst players, coaches and the fans. Players began to cry but due to the close connection amongst the players and community many fans took it as a lost for their own own community. They were right there from bringing joy to the community but was inches short, which showed there fight and determination to get as far as they did, but all in all they view this a disappointment to their coach and community.

Monday, March 26, 2012

Excersise # 3 Teen Reads Book Reviews

http://www.teenreads.com/reviews/black-boy-white-school
http://www.teenreads.com/reviews/curveball-the-year-i-lost-my-grip
http://www.teenreads.com/reviews/chomp
 Requirements
    *Summary Of The Book
    * Evaluation Of The Book
    *What To Like About The Book
    * Talk About The Type Of Book It Is (Sometimes)

Thursday, March 22, 2012

Note# 1

Mosquito

By J. Patrick Lewis                                                 But a minute later Archie Hill
I was climbing up the sliding board                        And Buck and Theo Brown
When suddenly I felt                                               Were horsing on the monkey bars,
A mosquito bite my bottom                                     Hanging upside down. 
And it raised a big red welt.                                    They must have looked delicious
                                                                                 From a skeeter's point of view
So I said to that mosquito,                                       Cause he bit 'em on the bottoms,
“I'm sure you wouldn't mind                                    Archie, Buck and Theo too!
If I took a pair of tweezers
And I tweezered your behind!”                               You could hear 'em goin' HOLY!
                                                                                 You could hear 'em goin' WHACK
He shriveled up his body                                         You could hear 'em cuss and holler,
And he shuffled to his feet,                                      Goin' smack, smack, smack.
And he said, “I'm awfully sorry
But a skeeter's got to eat!                                          A mosquito's awful sneaky,
Still, there are mosquito manners,                            A mosquito's mighty sly,
And I must have just forgot 'em.                               But I never never never
And I swear I'll never never never                            Thought a skeeter'd tell a lie
Bite another bottom.”



In the poem Mosquito by J. Patrick Lewis, the narrator describes what almost seemed to be a blissful ordinary time at the playground just sliding down the side, however all of a sudden there was a mosquito bite that "raised a big red welt." At first the narrator lost and confused, only wanted that welt to disappear thought that if he took a pair of tweezers he could "tweezered your behind!" away. Funny enough the "skeeter" discuss with the narrator that he was sorry and forgot about his the mosquito manners, plus he explained how " I'll never never never Bite another bottom.” Even though this was stated the skeeter will not "bit another bottom" he repeatedly is forgetting because he strikes again and bites Archie Buck and Theo. Now the narrator at the end of the poem has gained this feeling of  shameful aggravation what he or she views a sinful act for this mosquito to be "awful sneaky" and "mighty sly" which had destroyed and altered his perception of mosquito's, due to the narrator ever thinking that a "skeeter'd tell a lie"... Disappointment and Failure is what the narrator senses.

Monday, March 19, 2012

Exercise #1

In the opening chapter of "Cruddy"written by Lynda Barry expresses an outspoken enthusiasm that exemplifies or suggest the childish hostility type of personality. The literal content of the passage and the use of describing everything with the word "Cruddy" can be evidence for the maturation of character, which allows the passage to be easy to read and understand. With the repetition of the word Cruddy is illustrate the aggravated "Cruddy" frustration within the world. The person writing cruddy is writing about "the cruddy girl named Roberta" because she "was writing in her cruddy book of her cruddy life". This was about a girl who sees her life as cruddy and everything in her life is cruddy. Her life is cruddy to her because she has a difficult time to "concentrate to write" due to her sister not being quiet, which she explains by writing "she will not shut up,she will not shut up," over and over again. This demonstrates the frustration and/or cruddiness of her life to the point where she wants to "Bash her..Head"

Friday, March 16, 2012

Quarter 4 Reading Goals

Reading Goals
1.Read outside-but only on nice days.
2. Finish 3 books by the end of the Quarter.
3.Re-Read a book that I started but never finished.
4.Have a different location to read each week but only twice a week.
5. Read 20 min. of all my books that i am reading currently.

Wednesday, March 14, 2012

Anthology Theme!!

Dissapointment & Failure

Hard Times~Michael Ryan

FootSteps~ Fanny Howe

The Darker Sooner~ Catherine Wing

Bad People~ Mark Halliday